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One MBA Admissions Essay Example For Multiple Business School Applications

Rather than writing MBA application essays one by one, there is a way to optimize the process


Wed Oct 25 2017

Polina Artemenko is an MBA Strategy application consultant. MBA Strategy possesses in-depth expertise in helping applicants to get into top business schools around in the USA, Europe, and Asia, and it is proven by over 2,000 successful stories.

There are two months left before R2 application deadlines. If you have finally beaten the GMAT, the time to answer your MBA essay questions.

Imagine a cozy evening in. You make a cup of tea and open your laptop. You’re ready to craft your Harvard essay and…nothing happens.

How should you start? Should you mention how you came second in that swimming competition at university? Should you say more about that exhausting project? What do people even write in these essays? Your tea’s gone cold, and your laptop screen is blank. 

It’s best to divide your prep into several stages. If you’ve not finalized your school choices, do more research: reach out MBA alumni, participate in admissions events, and scrutinize schools’ websites.

Apart from pretty standard brochures, stating that an MBA from School X is the most incredible MBA in the world, you may find admissions and students’ blogs there, and this is where the real treasures are buried.

After selecting your choice b-schools, you need to make sure you can meet all their requirements: essay topics and word limits, application form questions (which may include ‘hidden’ essays), and even reference templates.

Then, you will have not only a complete to-do list, but a tool to optimize the writing process, saving plenty of time and resources.

To clarify how it works, let me use some Wharton, Tuck, UCLA Anderson, and NYU Stern essay questions as examples:

·     What do you hope to gain professionally from the Wharton MBA? (500 words)

·       Tuck educates wise leaders who better the world of business. What are your short- and long-term goals? How will a Tuck MBA enable you to become a wise leader with global impact? (500-700 words)

·       We believe that the best results are achieved when you share success, think fearlessly and drive change.  With this in mind, what are your goals at UCLA Anderson and in your short-term and long-term career? (750 words maximum)

·       What are your short and long-term career goals? How will the MBA help you achieve them? (NYU, 500 words)

Despite the different wording, it is clear that schools need to know your career goals and the role of their MBA programs in helping you achieve them. That does not mean that all goals-related essays should be the same: each business school has its features, which you should outline, proving your intention to apply.

However, your career plan is most probably a kind of constant: one does not want an MBA itself. One aims to fill in the gaps in their knowledge and skills to mount new professional heights. Therefore, sentences describing your career aspirations can be virtually copy-pasted.

Another tip is to tell same stories to different schools, which ask you to share a leadership experience. Consider the following essay topics:

·       Kellogg’s purpose is to educate, equip & inspire brave leaders who create lasting value.  Tell us about a time you have demonstrated leadership and created lasting value.  What challenges did you face, and what did you learn? (450 words)

·       Describe a leadership experience and how you made a positive and lasting impact (Berkeley, 250 words)

·       Provide an example of your leadership – professional or personal – and explain what you learned about yourself through the experience. (Emory Goizueta, 300 words)

Indeed, you may pick one case from your experience, when you made a significant and lasting impact, proved yourself as a leader, and learned a valuable life lesson.

It is better to rely on the largest word limit and then cut the unnecessary parts. Berkeley sets a 250-word limit but does not ask you what you have learned, therefore you may eliminate this paragraph from the initial story. As a result, you will not need to make up three different essays, but use only one and then slightly adapt it, given the word limits and essay questions wording.

To summarize, instead of writing application essays one by one, from school to school, you need to see the whole picture first and analyze, whether there is a chance to optimize the process.

Identify similar topics, choose the most impressive examples from your experience and present them, adjusting accents and eradicating wordiness if necessary. In such a way, it will be much easier to overcome the fear of the blank page and create an outstanding application package.